This is my story – part fourteen

December 17, 2013

Leila glared at Molly for an uncomfortable amount of time. “How?” she asked finally. “I worked it out,” said her sister. Leila suddenly lunged at Molly, pushing her into the secret passageway and slamming the door shut. “Let me out,” Molly screamed, but Leila’s heavy footsteps were already growing faint.

This is my story


4 Responses to “This is my story – part fourteen”

  1. I Like the two threads of the story and about the story running parallel, In fifty word chunks though that’s hard to do!

    • Amanda Law said

      Thanks, Ian, I’m glad you like it. I was a bit worried it was too hard to follow, but it seems not.

      Not long to go now!

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