Seven days: Saturday

October 12, 2013

When the police found Robert he was locked in a bedroom at his lover’s house. On her arrest she broke down, citing jealousy as her motivation. He had got up in the early hours of Monday morning to go to her, pandering to her suicidal threats. That was his mistake.

 

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2 Responses to “Seven days: Saturday”

  1. O.o. I like this, lots of mystery and questions and just enough information to create a brilliant hook. Fantastic use of fifty words.

    • Amanda Law said

      Thank you, glad you’re enjoying it. It’s nice to write a story in bite sized chunks that fits together as a bigger picture.

      Amanda x

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